The main thing I learned to do in the first paragraph is get to the point and ask a question. At first I struggles with too much background information, and aimless rambling, but I think i cleaned it up good. I stated my opinion on a problem, and got to the point and asked my question. the rest just flowed from there.
I found it hard to get to the point of my problem without making allegations. Its hard not to be assertive and point the finger when your trying to get a point across. All in all however I feel pretty confident about my micro theme.
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